Very well written first and foremost. I liked the story minus the ending. Too sudden of a change. I suggest have a bit of lead in to it, or add another part that explains why he suddenly raped her.
Overall a 9/10 one of the few good reads on here anymore
Ha, yeah. I was basically jerkin' it the entire time I was writing it and I decided it was time for me to get off. I was going to write more where he goes back to being all normal and explains that it was just another form of scientific stimulation.
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